ok..that is so awesome..its a pity is so short~ i love to read more~but im content with this anyway~ this is just a cool way of telling a story of Alexander and his love for Hephaistion..this is just so cool~

So sad... I loved the line:

"I had thought that with Hephaistion out of the way, I would truly have Alexander all to myself. Now I saw the truth; with Hephaistion out of the way, there was no Alexander left for me to have."

So good

Another really charming story. Something tells me you've read "The Persian Boy"! It's not exactly my favourite novel about Alexander but it casts a long shadow and you're story improves on it while still giving Bagoas a credible voice. Once again, I do hope you'll write more.

Interesting.

Wow. That was awesome. One question, though: is the narrarator male? Female? A servant, or a concubine? What? I'm sorry, but I'm curiuos. It was a wonderful story, though. I especially liked the end, where the narrarator, even though she (I'm assuming it's a she) realizes that, even though she loved Alexander, she had to let go. I say, bravo.