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| Amber 2006-07-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo sad... I loved the line: "I had thought that with Hephaistion out of the way, I would truly have Alexander all to myself. Now I saw the truth; with Hephaistion out of the way, there was no Alexander left for me to have." So good |
| moon71 2005-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseAnother really charming story. Something tells me you've read "The Persian Boy"! It's not exactly my favourite novel about Alexander but it casts a long shadow and you're story improves on it while still giving Bagoas a credible voice. Once again, I do hope you'll write more. |
| aims80 2005-12-16 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting. |
| Jacqueline Hepburne 2005-12-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. That was awesome. One question, though: is the narrarator male? Female? A servant, or a concubine? What? I'm sorry, but I'm curiuos. It was a wonderful story, though. I especially liked the end, where the narrarator, even though she (I'm assuming it's a she) realizes that, even though she loved Alexander, she had to let go. I say, bravo. |