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Amber
2006-07-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseSo sad... I loved the line:

"I had thought that with Hephaistion out of the way, I would truly have Alexander all to myself. Now I saw the truth; with Hephaistion out of the way, there was no Alexander left for me to have."

So good
moon71
2005-12-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseAnother really charming story. Something tells me you've read "The Persian Boy"! It's not exactly my favourite novel about Alexander but it casts a long shadow and you're story improves on it while still giving Bagoas a credible voice. Once again, I do hope you'll write more.
aims80
2005-12-16
ch 1,
abuseInteresting.
Jacqueline Hepburne
2005-12-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow. That was awesome. One question, though: is the narrarator male? Female? A servant, or a concubine? What? I'm sorry, but I'm curiuos. It was a wonderful story, though. I especially liked the end, where the narrarator, even though she (I'm assuming it's a she) realizes that, even though she loved Alexander, she had to let go. I say, bravo.
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