Beautiful...Neisha

Hey Nikki,Keep your chin up. I undersstand how you feel. No, I am not showing ou sympthy but empethy. Well, who ever that jerk was, forget about him and move on. From what I read in your stories and on your profile, you seem really strong. Keep going and keep you chin up. He Was Not Worth It.

aw. *sob* that was sad.

: )

DH

Lovely. So sad. . . autobiographical?

Aw Nikki! This was a real nice poem, I kno how u feel, really i do. Things just take time to get over, you'll be okie...boyz just suck, but thats no offense to the actual nice ones out there lol...

Aw... *hugs* It's okay! I would say he was a bastard. But I wouldn't know. Because I don't know him.

It'll be okay, sweetie, it'll be okay.

Emotion is apparent, good. The word choice seems a bit akward, but that's my only critisism. 'My once joyful eyes are filled with tears'. Good line.

Dont blame yourself. Feigning ignorance is not a fault, just something that can get you in trouble. I dont think this one had quite the flow of the last, but i like it all the same

Later,Ffuffy

Look at me, too lazy to sign in again...you'd think I was you or something! lol

Aww hunni *jumps on you and hugs you to death* I'm sorry sweetie. Really great poem, but also not so great as I know what it's about. Chin up sweetie, I love you! *muah*