Really cool, so far. I don't fully understand it yet, but Thats why I hope you write more, I guess. BTW, if you wouldn't mind, would you check out my story sometime?

Wee, well, besides being confusing (since it was he he he he he he and I didn't have names...) it was well written. The characterization of the ... characters was unique and I do so love a good fantasy story on warriors once and a while (especially if it reminds me of Chaos Legion!). Great job on this. I hope you would continue with it.