This is great! I'm hopeless and making steady verses with rhyming. Great work. I especially like the last two verses.

Ah...don't we all have those kinds of days? Haha, it's only natural I suppose. This is a wonderful poem...how can I tell? I read it ten times before reviewing, that's how. Anyways, I think that everyone of every religion has these kinds of thoughts and that's what makes this world so difficult to live in. All we can do is hope, try...and sure, maybe we might end up in Hell or Purgatory or some strange place where anything's possible. But then you could think of it this way. Maybe there IS no Judgement Day and every single one of us is WRONG. There is no wrong or right religion and it's pointless to pick and choose. I'm Christian and all but just look at the Church...it's all split over POLITICS...of ALL THINGS! I just think we're screwed any way we put it.

Great poem, I enjoyed it.

~Gaki

I know how you feel. This poem is very well delivered. Although there isn't a steady rhythm or rhyme scheme (which obviously is never a necessity with poetry), it's still pleasing to the literary mind.

Great job, don't stop writing.

With all due respect,

Faerie Energy

I took a little too long to review this. :) Well "what needed," i think a was should be between those two words. Besides that its cool. I like stanza five. You should update your story. Emotionless. :) Happy Holidays. :)