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| failte200 2008-04-22 ch 1,  | abuseGah... Dammit, Venus - I should have known better than to read one of your stories... But I thought, aw, that sounds sweet... but NO! Jesus H. Christ. I saw one of your fics in the fave list of someone who'd just faved me. So I thought I'd give you a try again... *eyeroll* Goffik gurlz. |
| Blue Screen of Death 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseAh, the intricacies of proper (or not so proper) love...Just the right amount of fluff, lets not forget angst, and drama...And I actually felt sympathy for Zora until she pulled the "i'm pregnant" bit, accidental, true, or not... On that note, it seems like it all goes neatly to hell in a handbasket...at least its obvious Daincaire wanted to break it off with her... From the beginning, I expected somthing bad to go down, but your ending blew that expectation neatly out of the water. Vlatko and Dancaire sound better together than Dancaire and Zora...(though i am curious, ages?) |
| KageNeko 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abuseAw ;.; its so cute..but...sad and depresing, ..well not that cute...but..i like it...i'm a freak i guess... |
| rainbowskye 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI thought that this was beautifully written. I like the way it is split up and how the start to the first and last parts reflect each other. The ending was, well, I can't imagine another but why would I want to when you've written this one so well? Anyways, I enjoyed this very much. |
| Virginia Giselle 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I likes. |
| oh so cliche 2005-12-25 ch 1, | abuseWoah. Powerful. And crazy. Europeans it seems like to me. Lol. Interesting and pushing the limits. I enjoyed it. |
| Rhapsody's Shadow 2005-12-18 ch 1, | abuseAnther uniqe and dareing tale, I enjoyed it emensely, Love Your sweet Rhapsody Of The Shadows |
| The Unforgettable Sound 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abuseWhoa...And since I don't think I can get away with just saying that...Wow (no, I'll add more, I promise). I so was not expecting that. It was...Amazing. Wow. Wonderful. |
| multiples of six 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was pretty awesome. It reminded me a little of a gender-switched version of The Graduate. But I don't think I've once read a story of yours without a character dead by the end. |
| Kyria-Asimi 2005-12-14 ch 1, | abuseI like this, actually, though i'm not quite sure why. I like the name Dancaïre too...even though i'm hating Carmen more and more...The ending's better than you made it sound when you told me about it, though. |