I like the inward struggle I see between fantasy of your characters in your book, and the reality of who they really are. This has a sort of melody like a song, which I like.

The only thing you might want to look at is the ending. Most of the poem is about characters and you end with stating your a poor author (not true). But other than that... Good job!

wow

I haven't been on here in ages, just don't have the time.

I am not poet,Perhaps merely a writer,A poor one at that,A writer all the same

yep, I feel that anyone still writing for this website should read this.

Sorry for the cynicism,

Have a beautiful day,TMO

very good abstract word flow. Good lines like,"But feelings- Are real- And fingertips write them," help add to the simplicity and overall tempo of this.It rolls down the page well.

not bad interesting ^^