| Reviews for Land of Dreams and Failure |
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lilyqueen777 10/18/07 . chapter 1your I's are together in a few words :P but other than that...wow sweetie...wonderful poem ] |
Unimportant 3/13/07 . chapter 1Intersting. I especially like your use of imagery. Great job! |
Underground Constellation 12/1/06 . chapter 1I like this. Its beautiful. One thing, though. Some of your I's have merged with other words. Its probably a formatting issue, so its fine. |
Forever Forbidden 11/22/06 . chapter 1Good poem. The land of dreams and failure is a great image. -Helen |
lilyqueen777 12/15/05 . chapter 1 hm...i wonder too...i like this poem..only problem is i wanna know more details! but beutifully written |
lilyqueen777 12/15/05 . chapter 1 hm...i wonder too...i like this poem..only problem is i wanna know more details! but beutifully written |