 lilyqueen777 2007-10-18 . chapter 1your I's are together in a few words :P but other than that...wow sweetie...wonderful poem =] |
 Unimportant 2007-03-13 . chapter 1Intersting. I especially like your use of imagery.
Great job! |
 Underground Constellation 2006-12-01 . chapter 1I like this. Its beautiful. One thing, though. Some of your I's have merged with other words. Its probably a formatting issue, so its fine. |
 Forever Forbidden 2006-11-22 . chapter 1Good poem. The land of dreams and failure is a great image.
-Helen |
 ~*lilyqueen777*~ 2005-12-15 . chapter 1 hm...i wonder too...i like this poem..only problem is i wanna know more details! but beutifully written^^ |
 ~*lilyqueen777*~ 2005-12-15 . chapter 1 hm...i wonder too...i like this poem..only problem is i wanna know more details! but beutifully written^^ |