your I's are together in a few words :P but other than that...wow sweetie...wonderful poem ]

Intersting. I especially like your use of imagery.

Great job!

I like this. Its beautiful. One thing, though. Some of your I's have merged with other words. Its probably a formatting issue, so its fine.

Good poem. The land of dreams and failure is a great image.

-Helen

hm...i wonder too...i like this poem..only problem is i wanna know more details! but beutifully written

hm...i wonder too...i like this poem..only problem is i wanna know more details! but beutifully written