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Hate In The Form Of Passion 2005-12-18 . chapter 1
Skeletal bruises elongate her face,

this transition of transitory power,

So apparent, yet left so tongueless.

Purity no longer flirts in her eyes.

That was a beautiful part. Everything seemed to flow nicely especially the ending. Great work. I loved it.
leben 2005-12-15 . chapter 1
Dark, dramatic, flowing; I love the feel. Awesome.
just a teardrop 2005-12-15 . chapter 1
some gorgeous lines. the title is lovely. nice work :D
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