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| Changethesubject 2005-12-17 ch 1,   | it's weird to think of how no matter how much pain we are in, the world keeps on turning. i liked the way you captured the spirit of this poem. |
| BlEeDiNg DaRkNeSs 2005-12-16 ch 1, | I know how you feel...good job ^^ |
| Vanities-Pride 2005-12-15 ch 1, | very good. i like how its so damn true.keep doing a good job!Jed |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-12-15 ch 1, | I quite like this poem but I found one spelling error, it's 'dying' not 'dieing' EB |