i like this a lot.. the reptition of maybe gets your point across and i can totally relate

Did you write this as a song? Because it very easily could fall into a pattern of that sort.

Nice, though "maybe baby"... I don't know, it just doesn't flow for me. I like the last four lines much better. Actually, I think the last four lines are my favorite. How convenient! ^_^

Okay here's the thing. Its good, lyrical and good emotions too. Melancholy at its best