Very effective. The format drew me in and the words kept me hooked. I like that you made unhappiness seem so foolish--a refreshing change of pace from the rest of the poetry on this site.

-Leila

oh, this has got to be one of the best poems i have read on this site. great work, love how it's very pleasing to the eyes.

that has got to be the most craziest thing i've ever read! and i love it!...and where may i ask did you find a talking flower?...i use to think i was the only one that knew of the talkign flowers! ah lol write on! * snap, snap*

The Johnson looked upon the poem, and saw that it was awesome.

This goes on my favourites list!

I love the poem, but I also love the format! I daresay you did that intentionally... I thought it might be in the shape of a flower but I'm not seeing it. Looks cool anyway.

Write on!