Wonderful, I love your unusual combinations, the synaesthesia, the use of the adjective "brittle" referring to mist or the idea that the fisherman's gaze is "bobbing" on the sun - wonderfully inventive, great work.

Such a beautiful picture! a breeze of fresh air amongst poems of love or angst.. Just a pretty image that brightens us up.

Ho-ly... wow. This is definately a sharp contrast to "Rust." Interesting how you put lemon-symbolism in a poem about a fisherman. Again, it just drags all of one's senses within the work. Magnifique!

Oh, very cool. Puts nice images into my mind... I love the "lemon sun" part!