|Reviews for On Why It's Better to Just Be the Penguin|
| Firefly88 12/16/05 . chapter 1
The metaphors and similes in this are so good! I agree though that the ending is a bit confusing. I think its her behaviour in the last stanza that I find confusing.
| FunkyFlower 12/16/05 . chapter 1
sad and touching. love the vocab in this tho i find the ending a little confusing. otherwise, great intro and altho unusual, a great style too! keep writing,