Wow that was fun...feel like I saw an old friend after a long long time away...please don't wait so long next time. I miss them

I don't think this is quite as angsty as you think it is. I do think it is quite normal in a most unnatural way. (Does that make sense?)

I think the ending was a bit expected but workable...Have some fun with it.

Thanks for the update and keep it comin :)

Amazing...Don't leave me hangin here...write it!

aww...

"Only a little for the date, but not for you." What an adorable line!

aww...

^_^

that was sweet! keep up the good work!