Reviews for Advocate: The Last Judgement

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Kani Dectsani 2008-11-07 ch 72,	Now I'm caught up! I'm finally finished with what you have written! Now I just need to wait until you update some more, and then continue reading! I will e-mail you with my answer, but I also want to put it here. I want to read either Salel's or Davin's backstory. Davin would have a lot of hardship from his halfbreed background. Salel would have quite a bit of new information about the Western Continent. Either one of them would be perfectly fine with me. Lith would also be a good background story. I would like to know more about what really happened to him. We know the bones, but not the meaty parts. About this chapter, really good! I loved it! Keep up the awesome work, Kitai!
Kani Dectsani 2008-11-07 ch 71,	WOW! This chapter had quite a bit of background. I loved the background! The section with Lith and Salel was adorable! They are getting closer, without realizing it. I LOVE how you have their relationship. The art gallery was a nice touch. And how would people recognize him as the dragon if all they have is a painting? Most would realize that the painting was done thousands of years ago, so the people wouldn't have been alive anymore. Or at least they would think that. Keep up the amazing work, Kitai!
Kani Dectsani 2008-11-07 ch 70,	Who knew that the old enemy would now come back to help? I hated Reivan, but now I don't, not really. He did do someting technically bad, but it was to inform the group. I liked the scene with the ship. One thing got to me, though. 'For a physically weak girl, she had an iron grip.' That's talking about Salel. If she's a powerful slayer, then how is she physically weak? Anyway, good chapter. There wasn't the normal spark, but still the awesome-ness was there! Keep up the good work, Kitai! I want to know how it ends!
Kani Dectsani 2008-11-06 ch 69,	The world is falling apart! Not good. Another favorite quote goes into the book: "'Don’t worry, Salel'. He smiled softly at the girl standing next to him. Even though she was a slayer, and even though he wasn’t sure if she really hated him or not, he still wanted to help her. She was one of his companions, but more importantly than that…she was a friend. 'Even if you do fall…I’ll go after you. I promise.'" I LOVE THAT ONE! He's so loyal, and their relationship has changed so much, so realistically, that I just wish they were real so I could see it myself! Awesome job, Kitai. I loved how the captain brought more information about Matt's past into the story. Also, the connection with Sepfeer. Kayal's dream scared me. Time is really running out, now isn't it?
Kani Dectsani 2008-11-06 ch 68,	Yey! The Celentis family DOES own a ship! laughs Davin's comment was right on the money, though. His family does seem to own the entire world, so why not a little ship? That chapter sounded like a good wrap-up chapter, then the introduction chapter for the next book. It's the feeling I got from that chapter. Maybe the start of the third book of Advocate, the Last Judgement? I don't know. I want to keep reading! I should finish what you have today or tomorrow. Yey!
Kani Dectsani 2008-11-06 ch 67,	Another amazing quote to add to my favorites list! '“Lord Xystus,” he began, his message coming in fragments. “At the southern border…Atticus and Davin. They’re back.” Before he could say anything else, he had to jump out of the way as everyone ran from the room, leaving only Xystus, Alda, and her two guards. The rest of them were on their way at full speed to the southern hill. The moment they had been waiting for had finally come. Their friends had returned to them.' I love that one! Jump out of the way... I know how that feels. I've had to do it before. SUCH a heart-warming homecoming. You do fluff-without-the-fluff moments REALLY well. I love it when you do that. And you have the right amount. You don't try to get too much stashed in one chapter. It's all very well balanced. Maybe that's why I love your writing style so much. You're balance is amazing. Anyway, Gariff. Nothing ever gets by that guy. He's cool. I like him. Don't get rid of him, okay? Amazing chapter, Kitai! I can't wait to keep reading!
Kani Dectsani 2008-11-06 ch 66,	...Wow... Just wow. I really started crying when Xiphias had his monologue. I hardly even know what to say, other then you write amazingly well. Good enough to bring tears and a closed throat to me. Wow. Just wow. Kayal can do it!! Go Kayal! I can't really say anything other than that. Maybe alittle more with Xiphias, but nothing needs to be changed at all! Keep up the absolutely 120% amazing work!
Kani Dectsani 2008-11-06 ch 65,	Okay, you didn't start with the end of their fight, but you did wrap it up nicely. AND HE DIDN'T DIE! Sarah's going to be in fits/depression until he gets back. There's no way for her to know that he is alive unless Sano feels his vibrations again. Amazing chapter. I'm not even sure if I can review it to what it deserves. Each chapter, you get better and better. I can't wait! I want to know how it all ends!
Kani Dectsani 2008-11-06 ch 64,	I almost don't want to stop and review! If the next chapter doesn't start with the end of this battle... Ooh, I'll get you... laughs That was amazing! I loved it! I always love your fight scenes. They are so real! Short review. I want to know what happens, DANGIT!
Kani Dectsani 2008-11-06 ch 63,	O_o Wow. I hadn't seen that one coming. Or maybe I did, but not that BLUNTLY. I feel bad for Matt now... Everyone's out to get him, physically and mentally. If it were me being told that I way causing the world to fall apart, I don't know what I would do. Really good chapter. I loved how you had the background of Lloyd and Sano. That was cute. I really liked the background of the Winter's family. And I'm also wondering about Sarah's Kirosu now. So many questions that won't be answered unless I read. sigh NEXT!
Kani Dectsani 2008-11-06 ch 62,	Yeah, I was right. That last chapter was the last one that I had read as Aldrane Hundara. You were right when you said that this chapter was 'meaty'. I LOVED IT! It had a lot of development, dialogue, and also pushed the story to new heights! I really liked the scene with Salel and Lith. It's so true, that it's easier to talk to people when they're asleep. People do it all the time, really. I'm a little worried about Sano... That's really all I can say. I'm worried. Keep up the amazing work, Kitai!
Kani Dectsani 2008-11-06 ch 61,	Awesome chappie! Like always, I loved it! I think this is about where I stopped last time as Aldrane Hundara, so from here on out I don't know where you're going. I CAN'T WAIT to read the rest! Anyway, I liked how you had the conversation with the girls. That was cute, plus very likely to happen. Girls need girl time with other girls. Poor Lith. All beaten up... Like always, but still, poor Lith. His personality is so believable that you just want to hug him! Lets go!
Essie Bessie 2008-11-03 ch 72,	omg! when are you updating? i want more! :(
Kani Dectsani 2008-10-29 ch 60,	Well, Attachment is just a few steps away from Attraction! Yeah, yeah, I know that you don't want to speed their relationship, but it's cute when you do stuff like this. Short review, THAT WAS AWESOME! KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK, KITAI!
Kani Dectsani 2008-10-24 ch 59,	Uh oh! Problem! Definantly not good for Lith! I don't have too much time right now. That was a VERY good chapter, though! I really am wondering about Salel's scar now. Dragon-shaped, Burned, simple/butterfly-like. And then think about her past. Xander ((You really like X names?)), bad love, Slayer village, conviction against dragons, dragon attack, etc. Lets keep up the amazing work, Kitai!

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