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| Olivine 2007-02-17 ch 1,   | You wrote this a few years ago, but it reminds me of the song "Run Away, Love" by Mary J. Blige and Ludacris that's been playing on the radio, recently. Except it's a bit different from the poem. Well, more than a bit, but you know what I mean. Another great poem. --Ss. |
| Tikvah Ariel 2006-01-30 ch 1, | You forgot to end the quoatations, other than that though I think I like this one best. A little repetative but it clearly conveys emotion |
| Sacha Lynn 2005-12-23 ch 1, | This is a pretty good poem. The last line is really.. hmm... final? I don't know, but it does have a sort of finality to it, like "this is my decision and there's no turning back from here." It's really good, though. Thanks for the review and happy writing. |
| Summer Shudder 2005-12-21 ch 1, | Ooh nice job! I like the last line a lot, "or end it all to run again" And thank you for reviewing my writing! |
| Alteng 2005-12-18 ch 1, | Okay, I've done the poems! And Pink Floyd is fab! You ought to try out "Saucer Full of Secrets" for some really wacked out Floyd! Anyway, nice poem. Indeed, that is the way of running. Usually, you can run from one thing, then run away from another thing, until all you do is run. Oh well, I am not a poet, and I don't review poetry well. I will be reviewing Atreyeb in the morning. |
| akikami 2005-12-16 ch 1, | very nice-and rhyming! nobody ever rhymes anymore-they're all into nothing but free-verse at the current time. oh and thak you for reviewing ALL of my stuff. *sniff* the only person who reviewed that was my friend that I emailed to. It really enflates my ego. |