Another great chapter. I hope you can get this published because it is really good. Keep it up.

S.S. Dailey

Wow, that was pretty intense! I didn't finish reading all of it yet, but I like what I'm reading so far. Keep up the good work *thumbs up*

Awesome. I haven't read it since the first few chapters and since then the story has developed nicely. Good luck with finishing this and keep up the good work.

That's the best story I've read in quite awhile! It's even given me some inspiration for my own story.

Boy, Burt is one self-obsessed teenager! Things seem to be progressing nicely - please don't rush the end. :-)

You make it, I'll buy it. :)

Very cool. I like it a lot - a "tragic" superhero story (i.e. not your usual "superhero saves the day" kinda thing). Please keep going with this! :-)

absolute stunning. I just can't wait for you to continue and finish the story. i was wondering where you got the idea for this story genetic tampering, and just wanted to let you know that you have an awsome plot going on. keep going and have fun.

Another fantastic chapter. It was great to see Alyson using her abilities. I can't wait to see how these teens take down the Triad. Keep it up and update soon.

S.S. Dailey

Man, I love this story. I hope John can save everyone and expose the Triad. Keep up the excellent work.

S.S. Dailey

Defintely good to see Alyson up and about, another great chaper.

Wow stuff is getting crazy, great job here you do a great job throughout the entire story balancing all these different subplots without derailing the action. The entire turn of events including what happened to Rob was phenomenal, I'm looking forward to the next update.

Have you thought about publishing this when your done! Its amazing! I've read hundreds of stories from and , and I would say this is a tie for first place, at least from all the aticles I've read. Brillant story!

No! I don't like cliffies! No more cliffies! My seat almost broke when I read the last paragraph and fell off it. Please hurry!

A bit of a slow chapter after the action, but I can see it's only gonna get better. Update soon!