|Reviews for This Girl|
| Timeless Deity 5/30/06 . chapter 1
Hmm, I'll stop bothering you soon. I like your poetry, its easy to read and makes an impact beacause of it's length. Once again, keep it up :)
| Nokturnal Augury 12/18/05 . chapter 1
That girlneeds a hug.
And that poem was awesome.
| a lonely september 12/17/05 . chapter 1
wonderful rhyming, nice job with this.
| just a teardrop 12/17/05 . chapter 1
i like the format of this piece. very nice. and the metaphors are good :D