|Reviews for Old Lady Charm|
| NotJustAnotherVillain19 5/15/06 . chapter 1
Another really great piece...I envy how you're easily able to render poems that are short sweet and rich in detail when it takes me two pages! Great work
| Rubyme 4/11/06 . chapter 1
My grandmother recently went into the hospital too. Not the best feeling.
But you should be happy with this.
| Frore 3/20/06 . chapter 1
Actually, I really like this for some reason. The images it puts in my head are wonderful, yet indistinguished, a quality I love. Nice!
| bjw 12/17/05 . chapter 1
Wo-ow. That..feeling you create - it's vague; fleeting, but you've still managed to capture a glimpse of that weariness that hangs onto the elderly. I had to read it a couple of times, but I enjoyed each read.:) I love the imagery..somehow they all bring out the old woman's "fadedness"..I don't know how to explain it! Haha. Lovely. I would highlight all my favourite parts and put it here but then I'd be highlighting the whole poem.:P It's good writing! Please keep posting!