Another really great piece...I envy how you're easily able to render poems that are short sweet and rich in detail when it takes me two pages! Great work

My grandmother recently went into the hospital too. Not the best feeling.

But you should be happy with this.

Actually, I really like this for some reason. The images it puts in my head are wonderful, yet indistinguished, a quality I love. Nice!

Wo-ow. That..feeling you create - it's vague; fleeting, but you've still managed to capture a glimpse of that weariness that hangs onto the elderly. I had to read it a couple of times, but I enjoyed each read.:) I love the imagery..somehow they all bring out the old woman's "fadedness"..I don't know how to explain it! Haha. Lovely. I would highlight all my favourite parts and put it here but then I'd be highlighting the whole poem.:P It's good writing! Please keep posting!