I really like your style here. The rhyming scheme really fits what you're trying say.

It's beauty, it's passion but it's also uncertain, shy and a little scared. Definitely real and understandable feelings that most of us go through at some time or another.

This is beautiful. I love your poetry.

Wow, this poem was short but speaks so much. This is so beautiful, the way you wrote it, stuns me. I hope you'll continue writing, because you're SO good at it. Love, Cool-Ruzz. P.s. ~ Do review my works if you'd the time