I really like this, it flows really nicely and i really like the second and last line. great job

I love the flowing nature of 'sleeping city in silver'. Beautiful. I love the hopeful yet downcast persona. Nicely written.

That last line really go to me; it's something I'm going through right now.

EB

Beautiful! Vivid imagery and emotion. This poem flows very nicely and is a perfect length. Great work.

awesome! good work. See i told you it would work out.