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oozu 2008-09-30 . chapter 1
Hi!

I didn't think it was funny at all.

A lot of the details about Mexico, crossing the border and stuff were way off...

For example:
A mexican, or other Hispanic for that matter, wouldn't move to the USA for such a... trivial reason.

And how does Pepe speak English? I doubt he studied it long and hard in Mexico without going to college.

None of the immigrant Mexicans I know crossed the border advertising themselves as Mexican by being dressed so obviously.

And donkeys aren't the preferred or most-used way of transportation in Mexico.

Please do not consider this a flame. This review wasn't intended as a flame.
method acting 2006-05-09 . chapter 1
Elongated writing. Like, you'd start out saying somethign and manage to make a paragraph of it. I don't know. It was funny. Cute. Clever. Nothing of legalities, but that's all right. Fine job.
artisresistance 2006-01-01 . chapter 1
pepe burro?? uh...
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