I don't mean this to be disrespectful, but I found your poem kind of funny. Then again I do tend to look at things like death with a touch of humor, so it's nothing personal. :P It's actually what made me like it so much.
Short, sharp, sweet. I like it, it sums up the truth. Keep up the good work!!
Jade (RainofDeathonMymind) 2002-02-27 . chapter 1
That is really good! I like that one alot! that is like my new favorite one! I also like the one that said something like "Death is my nickname, Hell is my home, Saitan is my friend, and finally I'm not alone". I really like that one! I can't wait to read your new poems! Keep up the good work!