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RedBerries 2006-06-20 . chapter 2
Yellan? I know this is the wierdest link, but is he based on a character from 'Jamaica Inn' by Daphne du Maurier? Because that books also has a thief called Jen, and the female lead's second name is Yellan. So using my amazing logic, I merged the two to form the character you know as 'Wavy'. I'm probably wrong right? Haha, wouldn't be the first time.

Great story by the way. When I was reading the challenge I didn't know how you were going to manage to do romance without the predictablity, but my doubts seem to be completely unfounded. It's funny, and potentially romantic and I love it!
Cherise 2005-12-19 . chapter 1
Are you issuing the challenge or is this your response to it? It's a good beginning though, because as it is the charecters are both unconventional and familiar.
jasmynes 2005-12-18 . chapter 1
Happy holidays + great story!

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