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| Fred Bubbers 2005-12-18 ch 1,  | abuseThis is certainly well written. Unfortunately, all it is is shocking. There is no one in this story with whom the reader can identify. What's missing is any information about the past relationship between these two people which might give some sort of explanation as to how we got here. |