FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| a lonely september 2005-12-20 ch 1,   | you did a nice job with this. it has a very empty, fearful feeling to it. you portrayed the feelings well. |
| Ashes.to.Acid 2005-12-20 ch 1, | I can sense the fear building up on the inside as I read this. Great job! |
| Saeger 2005-12-20 ch 1, | After everything I'm going thru in life right now, I can sympathize terrifically. Great job, putting that to words- the short lines gives a sharpness to the feel when reading, and helps the tone. |
| classic violet 2005-12-18 ch 1, | Good end. Keep writing! |
| write25 2005-12-18 ch 1, | interesting...i like the subtle, lone rhyme. i think its like this for all of us. oh and a piece of advice, allow unsigned reviews, theyre good. i can tell you how. ~Mariah |