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| Decollage 2005-12-18 ch 1,  | abuseWow. Beautiful, haunting, dark, and hopeful at the end. I like the Thing That Couldn't Possibly Be Human. My first thought was Satan- selling souls. It still could be, although I'm inclined to think differently. This Thing seemed disappointed with those who excepted- in all other portrayls I've read, Satan (Lucifer, something) is glad at the lost souls, ruthless in collection. If this was indeed Satan, well done for a different (more interesting) veiw. If not, well done for the same. Either way, I love it. What really pulled me in, content wise, was Bush. Ironically funny. Paris Hilton was amusing as well, and I'm frightened that I can pick up these referances. Your style is impeccable- Brilliant. I can't put to words what a strong short story this is. I urge you to try for publishing, you could do it. Brilliant work. |