aww thats really sad

i like how lovingly was used in parenthesis nice job

It took me a couple of times to "get" this poem. And then I thought "Oh, bulemia."

I think the message conveyed is semi-unique, more unique than a lot of messages conveyed these days, and certainly more unique than any message that I would be able to get across. I also think that the tone is just a little too "emo" for my tastes. I know, I know, finding a right tone for this kind of poem would be difficult, but I think that, if you have all the talent that I think you have, you could pull off something a little more original.

Oh god! This poem sent shivers down my spine! Amazing! I loved it so much!

sticking his fingers (lovingly) down her throattelling herthis is beauty, my dear

Brilliant. Just plain ** brilliant!