|Reviews for Thoughts|
| Spellcrossed 3/24/06 . chapter 1
This is a lovely poem, very meaningful.
| White Tea and Ginger 12/29/05 . chapter 1
I can't even begin to tell you all the times I've sat crying in my closet.
Well done. Simple, but oh so powerful. This speaks for a lot of us.
| ANLE 12/27/05 . chapter 1
Though I do love dreaming, I must say that the poem expresses perfectly how many people must feel... There are just those moments in life when we can not see up from down and we wonder why we thought up of unreachable dreams only for them to be shattered and for us to go through the agonizing feeling of defeat... but anyway, this poem has taken a heart.
| a lonely september 12/26/05 . chapter 1
the last two lines were incredible, just like the rest of the poem. wodnerful job with this.
| Kintyre 12/21/05 . chapter 1
Wow! Love this poem, apart from the last line, but other than that, it's great!
| Orion Demasecus 12/20/05 . chapter 1
I don't like that last line, it's so pessimistic. I mean without dreams my life just wouldn't be the same. Some dreams are comforting even though they can never come true.
| cornered.sensations 12/20/05 . chapter 1
Your poem was very good!
| ShadesofBlue69 12/20/05 . chapter 1
I love the 3rd stanza, you definatly created a beautiful picture with the words that express the feeling just .
| dusk orchid 12/20/05 . chapter 1
The feeling of isolation and trapped-ness is very intense. Brilliant piece with well thought out imagery.
| sloppy firsts 12/18/05 . chapter 1
| sunday night sky 12/18/05 . chapter 1
this is gorgeous. i will try to add you to my faves but i think its full :(