This is brilliant, theres not much more I can say really

Think there might be a typo in this line though For ever inch crawl forward

Powerful, I like! Conveys a well used but not often heeded message. Many people are "perfect" yet marred by the fact it is like looking at a bunch of clones.

Good poem, Well writen, not much negative feedback i can give really.

Cheers, Grimmand Honninscrave