AC class?? Well im guessing it is a type of assualt dropship, and besides they suck. Well awesome chapter, I am guessing the "passenger" is mister noname

*drools* AWESOME, me like mister noname. Well the story is very good so far, and the Whole TOS is very handy. I got no spelling errors in the story. Keep it up.

Its good. I like it. I think its weel writin, kept my attention. good writing. look forward to more

gr! you got me interested!! i want to read more! *stamps foot* :-)

This is pretty interesting and I'd definitaly read it if you put up more.

First to review, first to review, ya!

Alright, anyway, this opening was neat. A ton of action, still not quite sure what the setting is, but that's ok, we talked about it, I don't want to spoil it for anybody who hasn't read it yet. :P

There were one or two things I noticed that you might want to have a look at. Mainly only sp stuff, those are easily fixed. :P

“Damn it now’s not the time, T.O.S.” - This might be PP, but I think you want a comma after 'it'.

I thought there was a second one but I can't remember it, lol. Serves me right for not reviewing 'as I go', which is what I usually do.

Anyway, keep it up!