:) Very nice. Usually, when I write a rhyming poem, I tend to focus all on the rhyming and the meaning of the poem dissapears.

So very nice job.

all i can say is amen to that! and i think i need a new locksmith. in all seriousness naku my love, it helps with the hurt inside to know i'm not alone in my self hate, ya know?

OMG... This almost sounds like something that I would write... *scary* 0_o I like it though. Very sing-songie. _