Ahh...why stop here?!Sobs... wanna know what will happen later... please don't torture the readers :D XDlol. good chapter! keep it up!

cool chapter u have got here! Squeak around...:P

OMG! the last part was damn funny! haha! Faint! as usual u did quite well! Keep up the good work!

Update this or the world will self-combust...

I mean it!

*laughs* it's great. I love aura. She's so... well, almost bitter but in a justafiable way. Plus Damon makes everyone's heart melt...

*sighs*

Nachoes

and again you end at the worst place possible. AH!! make me kill myself why dontcha.

oh my **. fred's an angel

Yup, I liked it a lot! Worth the waiting.. It's a really hard decision.. I don't think I would be able to make it lol.Have a cookie (::) This story ROCKS

wow, this story is really good.damon and aura sound so cute together, but he's human,:(i'm kinda rooting for her to just do good deeds, but if she wants to get away from the pain dhe should be an angel

Alright... I'll shut up... i'm sorry! But anywhoos, this chapter was AMAZING, but shot. I loved this! So untill the next chap, Caio!

AW DAMN! Only three chaps... I'm so **. You seriously need to update... on all on all of your stories... I'm serious. The goodness needs to continue.

Eep! This is definitely one of my favorite stories... SUCH AN INTERESTING TWIST-- a girl who is bound to remain in a sort of limbo until she fulfills the one wish she had in life.

So far, it's been very well written; your characters, also, are 3D, and I'm sure you'll continue to develop them. ^_^ I'm interested in finding out more about Damon. ♥

Hopefully, you'll be able to update soon!

AH! WOAHOLY SHI... i like this story and all but SERIOUSLY WOMAN I NEED TO FILE A COMPLAINT. WHY THE HELL HAVE YOU GOT TO END THE CHAPTER RIGHT THERE?!

Ooh, you increase the tension here!!

Lol, not really but aw!

Fred is back!

And as an angel (I think)!

I hope that he doesn't disturb Aura's happiness in earth, though.

Hannah

LOL, you really have some crazy ideas!

And one of them really has a different plot!

Like in your story "The Unknown Gender",the plot there was for Cleo to really stop disbelieving herself and to follow her heart,

But in your story "The Piper and the Doll"-which I hope you could really change the title-was even better. It tells about a story of how a girl hated dolls and receiving one on her birthday and also the doll being a very special one.

I really love ytour ideas, girl! You rock!

Even though 'they' say that these ideas have been going on for generations, the authors have their own way too to make it look different with the others.

Just like you, you have those wild imaginations running crazy inside your head.

And also, this has been the longest review I've ever given to a chapter of a story- ever!

So I hope that you could spend some time reading this and probably giving me of what you think of moi's review! Hee hee!

Peace out!

Hannah

I can't wait for the next chapter! Good work