The ocean is another lovely inspiration. *sigh* I'm terribly jealous of your way of writing such great poetry in 16 words. Terribly jealous. Terribly.

Felicia.

...now THIS is #1. I loved it.

I am begining to like this 'Jorio' I do believe I will try a few and place them up on my own page, be sure to look out for me once in a while!

This one...presents loneliness...and desperation which I much understand... I believe actually exellency in a poet comes from within his own pain...how better to empathize with your paper than to empathize with yourslef?

Write on, darling!

ciao

-Coon