 Regin 2009-09-13 . chapter 3I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!! |
 your harbor 2007-06-21 . chapter 1Eh. This story for me is alright but I don't like it nearly as much as I like Stealing Madison. |
 AmbrMerlinus 2006-07-20 . chapter 3sweet story! i lub it. its has a unique plot.
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 Heth 2006-07-05 . chapter 3This is pretty good, although I still like Stealing Madison more. I kind of want a better description Douglas and maybe Denise, too. I can't form a picture of them in my head because all I had to start with was really just the hair and eye colors. I can't figure out what their clothing styles and everything would be at all...
It's a well-written story, although I'm generally biased againsed stories written from a guys POV (probably because I could never pull it off myself). But, it did make me think how it might be kind of cool to see Stealing Madison from Jason's POV since we don't really know any of what he was thinking about Madison most of the time.
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 Raven of Ice 2006-04-07 . chapter 3Wow. You write amazingly well. Update soon! |
 books4me 2006-04-01 . chapter 3Look forward to finding out what happens. |
 queen-lala 2006-03-26 . chapter 3i love it and can't wait to read more of it! update soon please!^_^ |
 Hannah O'Donnell 2006-03-26 . chapter 3 good chapter! keep up the good work! |
 sketchingaCYNiC 2006-03-26 . chapter 3did i say "jane?" *smacks forehead* i probably got one character from another story confused with yours. and i'm glad you explained the age thing. i'm a soph... hmm.. well, i guess it's logical. i know a soph kid who's turning 17 this year actually... huh.
anyways, i like how the story's progressing. did i mention the pacing is terrific? not too slow, and not at the speed of light. ^_^ & i'm really curious about jill. we don't see much of her, except in this chapter. she doesn't seem mean... but hmm... i wonder, maybe douglas really did cheat on her? like maybe he was drunk or something...
hehe. that incident of alex sticking her hand down his pants was funny. xD |
 twistedFAerieTALes 2006-03-25 . chapter 3 :) |
 queen-lala 2006-03-25 . chapter 2ur story is awesome! i love it^_^ update soon! |
 Kjersti (aurora borealis) 2006-03-25 . chapter 3 Great chapter. Glad to have you back. :) Can't wait to read more! This story has *a lot* of potential! :) |
 incognitus 2006-03-24 . chapter 3Hey this story looks interesting, I realy like reading it. Denise sounds a lot like my own sister, cos I hate it too when she's always on the same brain wave as me.
And I just found out you're in Singapore! Wow that's how small the world is, cos I live here too. If you don't mind me asking, which school are you at right now? |
 de Leon 2006-03-21 . chapter 2Good stuff, you're on my author alert list.
Update soon, please.
~Elaine |
 fallinghard 2006-03-11 . chapter 2i think the story is really good so far, has captured my interest, lol. All the characters are really interesting, like how Douglas was dating the most popular girl, yet hes really pretty normal on the social ladder. And how Dave doesn't even know if hes gay or not, lol. Most of the girls so far seem really bitchy, i think you should add at least one or two nice ones, or else you know, everyone is going to start hating girls, lol. |