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| OhDarling 2006-01-01 ch 4, | abuseI like pomegranates. One of my screen names is pomegraniti. It was a funny, if random, chapter. Although I suppose random is the point, isn't it? I like random. Keep writing and whatever. I am so bad at reviews. |
| Proudly Modest 2005-12-28 ch 4, | abuseI love pomegranites. |
| Proudly Modest 2005-12-23 ch 3, | abuseif you give up on this story, i will not rest until i have hunted you down and broken each of your fingers then dropwned you in burning oil, do you understand?? KEEP UP WITH THE STORY. >:@ |
| fire-breathing-kitten 2005-12-22 ch 2, | abuseHee hee...there's going to be a lot of egg- boilage going on, isn't there? Anyway, very funny story. Kind of pointless, maybe, but good pointless. I am liking your characters, even the annoying ones. But when does the sarcastic cat come in...?? |
| OhDarling 2005-12-22 ch 3, | abuseHaha, I like the pirate thing. Due to the utter preppines (versus princessy-ness) and Gothicness in your story, then it can't be a knockoff of Dealing With Dragons, and it _is_ amusing, so do keep it up. Writing is good. And I love, love, love the pirate thing. You should tell us some things about what Beau does as a pirate, as well as Elly's... mis... adventures at Flanrins. By the way, Wrede has a whole series of parodies of fairytales if you do like that sort of thing, I think I already told you, but it's the Enchanted Forest Chronicles. |
| Chronicler of Tellamare 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abuseHa! :D "and making fine pastries." That was totally random, and totally awesome! |
| OhDarling 2005-12-20 ch 2, | abuseThe goth made me laugh. Ha ha. Do update, fluff this may be, it is amusing fluff. And I see someone else has suggested Dealing With Dragons to you. Go to your library and read it. Or look it up on Amazon and read the first page. You should, really you should. |
| OhDarling 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abuseIt's interesting. Have you ever read Dealing With Dragons or the Enchanted Forest Chronicles (by the same author)? They're parodies of fairytales-- ie, princesses are sent to dragons etc. to get princes to rescue them and they can be married off, most of them are rather snivelly and annoying, but the main character of DWD is an unorthodox princess (black hair instead of gold, tall instead of petite, tried to learn magic and cooking and swordplay etc. but was told each time her parents learned that it was inappropriate for young ladies) and decides to become a princess for a dragon where she makes huge portions of desserts and organizes its treasure supply. Great book. But you should read it. Yours is interesting, too, but I think you'd be really interested in the books... the author is Patricia C. Wrede. But... yeah. |
| Proudly Modest 2005-12-20 ch 2, | abuseooh! i've read Dealing with Dragons! was good. i was trying to remember what it was called when i was reading your story. |
| cinnamon-24 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abuseIt's good, but it does sound familar. |
| Homie-A 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuse(warm smile)Read a bit too much "Dealing with Dragons", have we dearie? ;) |
| Proudly Modest 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuse*throws hands up in air* YAY! are you going to write another chapter? please? |
| Univenon 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuse*Stands up and cheers* Hurray for the utter random-ness that is this story. It may not be a real story, but it's still funny enough to keep me interested. Keep up the good work. =^.^= |
| Elliot Dario Alston 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseit is funny, very clever. |
| Mark-and-Haley 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseHa! That iz funny! Well, so far at least, can you keep it up? lol, update soon! -Aqua |