Hmnn, I really like this piece! The descriptions and everything were just...wow D It seems like he lived all out and met someone who he loved dearly, but she hurt him in return (unconciously) and now she watches him suffer and she doesn't know what to do. Ah well, I love it anyways. Definately going on favs -

Sumiko

I like it a lot... it's vey interesting... definately one of your bests

loved the simile "like dying snow and ice." My interpretation might be a little wierd, but I look on it like she cheated on the one she loved and lost him. Either he is now dead, or the bleeding to death thing wasn't literal and simply a metaphore meaning that when he found out about her betrayal - it felt as if his heart bled, and she destroyed his trusting nature and the love that was once between them, so the man he was, and feelings he once felt are now dead. I tend to see things differently to how they are intended sometimes, but this brings to mind a number of options, and it is really to the reader to decide, and make as their own. But either way- the end feeling we are left with is one of heartbreak and written, and it's great to see more work from you, luv Kaitx

To me it means: this person has killed someone, hurt someone, done something wrong, and the one they hurt has returned.

To you it means: I would love to find out.

Great job.