Hey! This is pretty good considering you probably wrote this in less than 10 minutes... the questions really make it sound personal... well done!

The first three lines: great. Its very parallel, and i like that structural element of it. nice. It has a nice pace to it, and the questions are very personal and that brings the reader in, so nice job there too. I can't really describe the ending, but i loved it. Glad you left it up.

p.s. thanks for reviewing Not So

says a lot...captures a lot of emotion. good poem

I like it. it's fast and doesn't seem to need to rhym. cool.