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Casey Drake 2006-01-20 . chapter 14
JACOB!! jacobjacobjacobjacobjacob... HE'S the precog!

SWEET!! sweet story as usual, though... these stories are short enough (I think) to be parts in one story. *shrug* but you're the author, so it's your choice.]

:) CD
Heart of the RubyFire 2006-01-18 . chapter 12
Wow, great chapter (well, actually, I mean great last few chapters)! I'm sorry that I've been too busy to review...January is always so unbelievably busy for me!! Once you finish this sequel, could/would you write another sequel? I hope the answer is yes because I really like reading and reviewing your fics; your characters are just so interesting and unforgettable!:)! I still can't help but wonder what was on that web site Jacob found...will that be in your next chapter.?.I suppose we'll have to wait until next time to find out...! I look forward to your next update- Dum Dum Dum...!

**Heart of the RubyFire**
Casey Drake 2006-01-18 . chapter 12
DANG YOU AND YOUR CLIFFIES!!

grr.

Can't WAIT... can't WAIT *dances*.

:D CD
A Dark White Rose 2006-01-18 . chapter 12
ehh i'm still hoping that adam will turn good he doesn't give me that vibe james did

still hoping

awsome chpts.btw

update soon i wish u luck on your writing!
Casey Drake 2006-01-17 . chapter 10
oh DANG!! NOO!!

Swe-e-eet... XD Have I mentioned I love this, barring one thing I've noticed: Why does she suddenly like her name, and decide to go by Collette instead of Sanders?

:) CD
A Dark White Rose 2006-01-17 . chapter 10
ah what's going on ?!

please please please please update!

i wish u luck on your writing!
Casey Drake 2006-01-08 . chapter 9
we-e-ird... but I'll wait to see what happens next.

:) CD
Casey Drake 2006-01-06 . chapter 8
waitwaitwaitwaitwait...

who's the hypnotist here? I'm REALLY confused! Or is Adam Prime the baddie and Greg the good guy? or whattiewhat?

And then SOMEone is a foreseer SOMEwhere...

:) CD
Ashikitti 2006-01-05 . chapter 6
What an intriguing twist to the story. Once again I am forced to wonder about the reliability or "Mr. Prime." I have to say that you cought me hook, line, and sinker with this story and am eagerly awaiting the next update. Keep up the awsm work!
A Dark White Rose 2006-01-04 . chapter 6
good they need another good guy what about one of the other characters that no one suspects like penelopy could be bad or something like that...i know what you mean by twisted plots.

Awsome chpt btw sry i didn't review last chpt on time though it was awsome.

i wish u luck on your writing!
Heart of the RubyFire 2005-12-29 . chapter 5
Yes, this was a short chapter, but that's okay. I wonder what Adam was doing up so early. I hope Sanders and Jacob are able to find something interesting on that web site. I am really starting to detest Sissy. I mean there are some people who are simply curious and other people who are nosy, and she is definitely the latter! Yay, I already have a reviewer and I haven't even started writing the first chapter of my fic yet!! Don't worry, I'll get started soon, though- scout's honor. Good job and keep up the great work!:)!

**Heart of the RubyFire**
Heart of the RubyFire 2005-12-24 . chapter 4
Wow, great chapter!! I like Adam, I think he'll make a good character, I'm going to guess that he's on Sanders' side for now. Maybe there are two people with special powers at that school, Adam for commanding people and Butch for being really fast and strong. I hate it when those school computers do that. You try to go to a web site and a pop up says that you're not allowed to, you're breaking school rules or something like that. Maybe when the three of them go back home they can use a different computer and try to pull the game up. You've inspired me, I've been thinking up this fic, similar to the one you're writing, for a year and a half now and I'm getting ready to start writing it. It's about these four kids who have special powers: Fire, Water, Wind, and Earth, and they have to battle other kids their age who are using their powers for evil. There's more to the plot, but I don't want this review to be too long. Keep up the good work! Merry Christmas!:)!

**Heart of the RubyFire**
A Dark White Rose 2005-12-24 . chapter 4
ha ha i knew it!

ok let's just hope he's a good guy...oh but what if they are more than just four?questions questions lol sry i must be annoying.

anyways thnx 4 updating please update soon though :)

Merry X-Mas and a Happy New Year

i wish u luck on your writing
Ashikitti 2005-12-21 . chapter 3
AWSM chapter. So surprised yet excited that you started a sequal. Is something going on with this music teacher Adam?
A Dark White Rose 2005-12-19 . chapter 2
hey u didn't really explain about Emma's eyes so please clear that up if it has to be in an authors comment or somtin please.

awsome story!

and if i were collette i would for one kick sissys ass (pardon my french)and second sissy's bro. third leash my anger at the lockers.

and i have a feeling that thatlady is up to somtin and that we probably already met the person they're trying to find.

oh yeah and don't they try to get emma at least some contact with her sister ?

soory about all my annoying questions so here's the credits.

again awsome job and story it goes smoothly and there's a nice balance with descriptions and dialoge put it's flows so natural i can picture every word and so on and i see it like a movie.

(btw why does she call herself sanders i would have suspected that she would've hate the nick name and get a new one but that's just annoying me i guess oh and maybe at the bottom you could add a reviewers cornorand answer reviews or somtin and if u want tell me to shut up if my reviews are annoying lol)

well please update soon it's realy good

Merry X-Mas and a Happy New Year

i wish u luck on your writing
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