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| Setsuna529 2006-06-27 ch 1,  | abuseThis is awesome. I really like both stanzas about writing and poetry. Fantastic metaphors. Beats the heck out of a poem about fruit. ;) |
| Runic Binary 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abuseI used to think that when people wrote some words in different fonts or styles, it was distracting. But in this poem, it makes it more interesting; gives it more meaning. I really identify with the last stanza: words are complcated, but the feelings they give you are simple and easy to understand. |
| fairEtales 2006-01-20 ch 1, | abuseGosh...I can't believe that I didn't review. I'm pretty sure that I told you what I felt in English, but whatever. Amazing poem, as always. It is so...imagistic. Ha Ha Ha...I completely made that up, but whatever. It is great. It brings out SUCH strong emotion, AND it also describes EXACTLY what writing is. Great work, hun! |
| Thareth 2005-12-29 ch 1, | abuseo i like how u designed it |
| Cecil13 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseI really like it. it doesn't seem like it would flow, but it does. And what you did with the letters, it's pretty... |
| Jeffie 2005-12-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is my fist review, i'm not going to write much, but this poem is truely amazing. I dont understand how all of this stuff can come to you in just one period of English. I think that using the italics and other marks on the poem made it much more visual, and a much deeper poem. Have fun writing, Jeffie |
| Lady Glass 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, so refreshing and original! I love this, I'm sure your teacher will be impressed. You've written your feelings so well and while they're so open and honest, they seem mysterious and hidden at the same time. They way that you've added italics, underlines, bolds, parentheses, spaced words apart, it just makes the entire read more interesing and enjoyable! Altogether a very satisfying read, I loved it! Much love, Lady Glass |
| lys 2005-12-19 ch 1, anon. | abusewow! that was some really good imagery. i sorta dont get some stuff but its probably just cause im really tired (its shiria night) but i cant believe you wrote that whole thing during english. i wonder what mrs brown will say. and i LOVE the way you played with the words with the whole funky bold and underline and italics and all that! really awesome looking and i think it really fits with the poem!love ya |
| q is for quirks 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abusewow. that rocks! it's really good. yeah... great with the bolding, underlining, and italics and how you did that. anyways, that's my two cents. great job overall! |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI quite like this, the format may have been a little annoying but very new and refreshing. The message it gives is also very true. You're lucky, in my english class, my teacher never askes us to write poetry. Ah, you sent me so much nice reviews, I appreciate your kind words. EB |
| tears from heaven 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseWonderful - its very well expressed and each somparison serrves a purpose of its own. I like this alot, keep up the good work. |
| sloppy firsts 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abusei think your teacher will be very impressed. your poem rings truth in it. it's just lovely :) keep writing! |