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Reviews for
Our Strange Dance
twilightswake
12/19/05 . chapter 1
nice _ lots of nice similes
insomnia in dreamland
12/19/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I love how strong this poem was with simple words. The last line was really gripping too. Lovely.