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I just found this story, And it is so good!
But the ending was sad.
I am so glad that you are writing a sequel, And I can't wait to read what happens!

heya, this is a great story. i really wish that hawthorne wasn't so dumb or mean when she confronted him about april and other girls. cya later ~ Alenor.

aww what a sad ending... -sniff- I hope the sequel they get back together, but you are the author -hugs her teddy- xD

Upate when you can!

i suppose i like it.

at first i had a little problem with the names, but after a couple of chapters i got a hang of it. maybe you should just stick with the nickname or their real name.

when she ran into kris at the store, it said she was enemies with him, or something. i didn't really get it, though, since they kissed and all. maybe you should have put him in a scene before and clarify that?

anyway, it's a good story, but sometimes it seems a little crammed. it doesn't hurt to elongate the plot, just as long as you overdo it.

hah. well, those were my two cents. :) keep it up, i'd like to read more.

i think you should continue the story.