Oh. Atmospheric. :) I don't know why, but it sorta reminds me of something by Poe, maybe because of the sense of foreboding and use of rhyme. Good job, though. I like how it ended on a positive note. :)

PS: Hahahahaha HI, DANI! I found you! You're totally on my favorite authors page now.

Extremely pretty! I've never been good at writing poetry, but I have updated some myself (that aren't very good). Yours happens to be great! It's a little complex and hard to understand, but I love how it rhyms, too. Keep up the good work with your rhyming poetry. * Gosh, I'm amazed with you, cuzz your so good and I suck at it so bad! * Good luck for the future and all that jazz.

Signed and Sealed,Miss-Nina