The ending is so chilling.

This one makes me paranoid. Never gonna be pregnant, but still, I'm paranoid. I liked it otherwise.

Again, I can't say that I know how you feel, but the emotion made it very realisitc. Beautiful stuff.

Nice portaryel of emotion, you write well. Sorry for your loss.

this is so sad... beautifully written, so expressive.

=( Awwr, so sad. The poem is really good, though. I think you chose the perfect format for this one. It clearly conveys feelings right through the heart. Good job.