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paputsza
2008-02-18
ch 2,
abuse1.65 meters is about 5'5. It's about average for a fifteen year old. But the average for males in the US is like 5'4 and a half inch so it's kind of close. Maybe he'll get a growth spurt... outside of the range of this fic and any sequels. i like ukes :] grunt
GothBooks17
2007-11-02
ch 22,
abuseI absouletly love this story. Please tell me you are going to finish it . Thank You so much if you aare going to .
Ruri Star Sykel
2007-03-14
ch 24,
abusecute, yup really cute!
Happinessispills
2007-03-13
ch 24,
abuseDAMN it was stopped there D:!!

Heh, how 'bout a combination of chocolate mousse with 69, and THEN Roe gets totally in the mood and.. You know.. *smirk*
Happinessispills
2007-03-12
ch 2,
abuseUhh.. 1.65 meters in height? Are you sure about taht xD?!
ZOMG you did not mention his eye colour :O! Ne, there was a few typo errors, but no probs.
princess max
2007-02-05
ch 24, anon.
abuseYOU CANNOT END THIS HERE.

Don't ask waht we want, just give it to us! lol.
Okami
2007-02-05
ch 24, anon.
abuseHiya, personaly i think they should do all 3 start w/ the ice cream then the 69 or sex either one can come first lol, and im sure alot of ppl who read this story would love that lol and u can even add a lil more, but thats my thought,
ttyl
Amanda C
ps: love your storys lol
Lady-Kurama
2007-02-05
ch 24,
abuseWhy not all three! That way you won't have to go through the gruesome decision making of picking only one!

Gawd, I'm such a pervert...

Update soon please!
Midnights Scream
2007-02-05
ch 5,
abuseinteresting...who would've thought all that would happen. Lol. cyril and Matt might not be so innocent.hm
Sapphire
2007-02-05
ch 24, anon.
abusei love your story, and i vote for either 69 or some fun with the desert lol
jka1
2007-02-05
ch 24,
abuseomg you updated yay i liked this chapter but then i went no during the ending i definately want them to have loads of hot passionate sex...but then again thats only if he feels ready...but if i was in his shoes id want victor to ravage me...im so torn lol great chapter keep up the great work ^-^
beloved18
2006-12-07
ch 23,
abuseah no i luv ur story im hooked on it and u jus stopped the story plz write more soon *whimpers and shows puppy eyes*
beloved18
2006-12-07
ch 5,
abuselicky^^
Okami-wolf
2006-12-04
ch 23,
abuseHiya I love this story and I hope you keep it going awhile. I cant help I love yoai hehe. Well BYE
princess max
2006-12-03
ch 23,
abuseHoly ** Matt is creepy:( Please have Victor make everything OK.
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