beautiful, brilliant poem! i loved the summary. the last lines give suspense. truly a wonderful piece of work. bravo bravo!

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i love this its so sad and beautifully written.. the ending especially and the reminiscent tone is awesome... great job

Been awhile! This is so graceful, but completely riddled with enigmatic sarcasm. Captivating. Shalom x

Beautiful. Deep. More than just pretty words.

Keep writing.

this is pretty good. love the ending. sad and touching. thanx for ur reviews btw, did u get my email? oh well, gtg, brilliant work as always!

mez

beautiful poem. simply, one of a kind.

* noelle

Very different, I've haven't read much like it! I like it, very nice :)

so amazing...awesome piece of writing!

Wow. Very sad, very impressive. I'm not even sure what to say, I can't put words to it. Touching, meaningful. Deep.

Brilliant.

The entire poem is worthwhile, but the last stanza.. that, my friend, is triumphant.

Wow, so full of emotion, great style of writing. What a tragic story.

this is gorgeous. a really inspiring piece of work. *added to faves*