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Neverlander12 2006-05-09 ch 1,	abuseGod I know this feeling. I haven't had to deal with these particular problems since I was a child but I still face the same basic issues. chuckles and blushes Sorry...about the piece- I love it. It's concise without losing the emotion and keeps the reader hooked in. Kudos. Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig P.S- thanx for the lovely review; that poem was definately one of my emotional ugliest
The Ponderer 2006-05-08 ch 1,	abusei think i fall in with everyone when i say you've really shown how people can get on your nerves and cause hell so easily... And in the most annoying manner possible...
BearClaw 2006-04-29 ch 1,	abusehehehe...thats how i feel alot ...welcome to my life...
Cassie Nova 2006-03-27 ch 1,	abusePersonally, i like it. i think it shows great emotion, what your feeling, so... basically that's the best type of writing there is. as always, peace Angelique x
LavenderFox-Daisy 2006-02-05 ch 1,	abusewow...love the intervals in the poem, its as if it flows from one direction/cobcept to another...the whole poem has had an emotional impact on me i know that sounds silly ...anyhow love each and every single line!
Victoria Humblydum 2006-01-05 ch 1,	abusei liked it, it definately hade an angry feel to it
Winter Flurry 2006-01-02 ch 1,	abuseI can relate! I know how you feel! And the short lines really exagerate(sp) the anger in it. It's really good!
M. G. Dempsey 2005-12-26 ch 1, anon.	abuse16:52This is great. The one-worded lines are like punches, brutal and straightforward e.g "Lies."/"Conceited."/"Again." This technique is also used well because it gives the poem a very 'angry' tone, like you're spitting your remarks at someone who may or may not be a cause of the anger. Seriously well done! Thank you for your reviews! Michael
Squishy Lucius 2005-12-23 ch 1,	abuseWOw..There are so many stong, powerful feelings in every single line of this piece. Just the way your anger spills out into your words is amazing and I can't help but notice how good people's writing is when they write when they are most upset. You got the impact and force, and the subtle fluency all in one...=( ...But I really hope you feel better now...and even then, its also ok to feel crummy sometimes. i think its just another wierd part of living in this strange place we call the world. People are like cheese...you just have to find the motzerella...keep up the awesomest awesome coolioness writing and dont ever let bad cheese spoil your day, later! _Me
blacktearsof*innocence 2005-12-23 ch 1,	abuseHmm, awesome poem! i'm sorry this has happened to you. see? doesn't it help to write about it? i think it does. well, very awesome angry poem. i can sense the emotion. very strong. wonderful. i like this. i hope things get better for you. keep writing forever and always, darling. luv always,~Davida
words music and love stay t... 2005-12-22 ch 1,	abuseWow! I love your poetry! It's so good! The emotion is very raw in this poem. I love how you've spaced the lines! It's so great! Amazing! Hope that you feel better, if not, there's always more poetry. Life is cruel, I know. I'm sorry!
Plinky 2005-12-21 ch 1,	abuseWow. Fantastic poem. Really really good. I can feel your anger. The short, snappy sentences really convey your feelings well, and the difference between the speech and the emotions works well. "Tears flow, / “Where are you?” / “When are you coming home?” / “Don’t leave me” / “please.”" That stanza was really good - emphasising the desperation and vulnerability. gave a good contrast to the anger in the poem. Sometimes when things build up like that and then burst out, really good poems come out of it. I had no idea you felt this way. ;( fantastic poem! Angst angst angst...
water lorelei 2005-12-20 ch 1,	abuseI loove this poem SO much!This is so true, "Always out/Like clockwork/Come back drunk,/Swaying,/Singing,/Laughing,/Joking,/You see my face/Crying." This is really, really a great work. "Lies/Conceited/Again/Same routine" I LOVED that part. So many people try to express this emotion, and you have succesfully put it out on paper simply beautifully (excuse the grammer). I hope there is another poem to read, keep writing! silent darkness P.S. How long does it take to update Crimson Eyes?!?
Autumn Dance 2005-12-20 ch 1,	abuseThis is incredibly deep and hurtful...I can feel your pain coming off the page. I had no idea you felt like that inside...I'm seriously depressed right now, so this has effected me more than I want it to...
parasitic pathos 2005-12-20 ch 1,	abuseeven though you dont care if you get reviews, i really could relate to this so i thought i'd tell you how much i liked it. Sorry that youre feeling yuck. Hope it gets better for you. Love M

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