Excellent. The prose & grammar is fine and the narator is itneresting. I can almost see your inspiration for this, in the study of the old mythologies and the "anthropomorpphic personification". It's a very entertaining story.

This is interesting.

Well Shadow, I think I'm back. Check my profile for a new story soon.

:D

-Alareic-

Cool, this was really awesome. I enjoyed it and well it was just plain my kind of thing, strangly enough. As usual wonderful job.

I know I haven't been around lately and I will get to the other stories you posted, but what can you expect from a pregnant lady. the middle of junuary and I'll be free from carrying around to babies. I just still need to figure out names for them.

Neways, I finally updated Destiny and Memories, or is it the other way around? Memories and Destinies. It's one of the two. But I'm sure you'll find it.

Merry Christmas.

fantastic. that was really neat. loved it. what gave u the idea for that? cool stuff.

Hehehe. It's good.

I saw one spot where you finished one sentence with "on her own" and the next with "on their own"... or something like.

Also, the end is a little bit confusing. I kinda got the jist after I read it through a couple of times.

But good fun, all the same.

i'm not sure whether i should be amused or...not sure what that other emotion is... anyway, i really like this story. 'anthropomorphic personification'...definitly going to have to remember that. when are you and Casey Drake going to write another chapter of Color Me Magic? it is a bit off topic, but it just popped into my mind. sorry for the random thoughts.

Shadowhound

i like. The Morrigan has a very... interesting mind.

There's a story somewhere around here called Because I Could Not Stop For Death, by... An Inside Joke. I think you might like it, but I cannot be sure.

:) CD