Very interesting. I got a very strong vibe of "fun" off of it. That's about as good a word as I can think of for it; I wasn't touched or moved to tears, as I'm sure was not your intention, I just found the whole piece's tone to be very pleasant. Very good, overall.

Oh priceless...to cute... could you be a bit more discriptive with your characters though...I did get a but confused on some parts especilly with the diolog...but I liked it...good fic..

That was hilarious. I loved it.

OMG this story is so cute and funny.

I really like this. Your characters are very original and despite the fact that it's a short story, they're also interesting and well developed.

This was absolutely adorable I must say. I really loved it and look forward to you future stories. Great job!

*claps* I love it! Maybe it's my obsession with everything gay, but I found this story to be absolutely wonderful. They're certainly very horney boys, aren't they? In Wal-mart of all places. Lol.

RobbiexClay! 8D~
Loved it. Super cutee :D

I decided that you've got LOADS of reviews on Saturday Morning Cartoons, and I've basically read all of your stories by now, so I thought I'd leave a review on this one, as it looked lonely with so few reviews =[.
I can't really think of anything vital or constructive to say, other than: I loved them and you are amazing *hugs*.
It may not be constructive, but I don't really care. I think it's a pretty good marker of sexual orientation that I found them...*coughs* interesting (in lots of different senses). I don't even know what I meant by that, and I don't care. Keep writing, or I'll have to stop talking crap; life won't be so fun then xD.
Much love x

god-**-damnit **! you make me wanna be a gay guy. instead, i'm a hopless straight girl who's afraid of getting in trouble, otherwise i'd be going out with a bi crack-** right now. **. good story. as i think i mentioned earlier

Hell yes, awesome crossover with Robbie. Sexy story.

Woah. This was just pure amusement the whole way through. I honestly cannot imagine anybody that'd be this flambouyant, but it's fun to try. Love it. ^^

Yee--HA! i love this story!

this is so funny i am adding it to my faves list.

cute with a pink fluffy orange eyeliner wearing cheery on top!
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