Made my blood run cold.
Last few lines kind of pinned me, made me shiver with the injustice.

The way you coupled monsters and... that thing was perfect, and the way it linked,flowed,moved was just so right. And stuff.

Lovely poem, like the whole ethereal feel to it. Kind of bittersweet, well done x

this one hits in the face with no excuses (that's a good thing to me). direct and shiveryscary and angrylost.these words are hurt.

mezzie

I like this. A lot. Great job.

so beautiful in a bloody moonlightsonata sort of way.

This is an extraordinary use of word choice and placement. The images presented show true emotion well. This is a unique and powerful work.

heartaching.

holy wow. unbelievable. what a heart wrenching piece. that was one powerful read, and totally unexpected. definitely going on my favorites!

')oh.r .i .g .h .t. : you were accusing me of infidelity('ack. that really hurt. a really powerful line. this was wonderful, the emotion in it made me shivver. great.

oh christ thats powerful. so bitter and cold and empty, this tells so much in so little words. and "so where were you when the slithering slime

slipped under my windowsill and pried open

my thighs with its slippery, scissor-shaped teeth?

" is just p-e-r-f-e-c-t-i-o-n. god, it makes me grimace to read it

i like how it all comes together in the end because i was expecting something different.

I love this. It was intense, especially the last line.

I love the irony and sarcastic, coupled with the pain. Makes it powerful.

wow, I LOVE the way this is written. Very good work, loved it.

Gorgeous wording in this. Images were lovely as well.